IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5.5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5 (General Training)
5.5
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14 Mar 25, 20:59
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses all tasks but contains several grammatical errors and informal expressions. Improved coherence and a more varied vocabulary would enhance the overall quality, while maintaining a semi-formal tone throughout.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 27 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 15 | |
| Lexical resource | 7 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Writing Task
#Travel Plans
#Informal
You are planning a cultural trip to a different country. Write a letter to a friend who might be interested.
Explain the purpose of the cultural trip.
Mention the dates and destination.
Invite them to join you.
Submitted Answer
Words226|Paragraphs8
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Dear Joe,
I hope you and your family
are are
all well! I always
want
to meet you since the last trip we went to United Kingdom
which was wonderful. It felt great to meet you and simon
after we graduated from high school. You two have always
been dear friends of mine, and always
will be.Anyway, the reason I am writing this letter to you is that I am planning to travel to Egypt. I have
always
wanted to be there from
elementory
school, cause
Egypt is one of the ancient civilization
in the world. And the pyramids, one of the seven world wonders is the secondary reason for me to go to Egypt.I am planning to take my days off from August
28
which i
believe is a Thursday, so I can spend the whole friday
to package
my luggages and prepare
for my flight on saturday
early morning. My destination is the international airport of cairo
at terminal 2.Do you want to come together?
I belive
there should be a long weekend in the first week of September, therefore
we can use 4 days of holidays
to take this international trip together.if you need to know anything else, just get in touch with me as soon as possible. I look forward to hearing from you soon!
Best wishes,
Oliver