IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 6.5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 6.5 (General Training)
6.5
Overall Score
14 Mar 25, 21:06
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Overall Feedback
The letter effectively addresses the task, inviting the friend and providing details about the trip. However, there are some grammatical errors and informal expressions that affect the overall coherence and formality. Vocabulary is varied but could be more precise.
| Overall score | 6.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 7.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 13 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 4 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Writing Task
#Travel Plans
#Informal
You are planning a cultural trip to a different country. Write a letter to a friend who might be interested.
Explain the purpose of the cultural trip.
Mention the dates and destination.
Invite them to join you.
Submitted Answer
Words224|Paragraphs8
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Dear Joe,
I hope you and your family are all well! I am keen to meet you since the last trip we went to the United Kingdom which was wonderful. It felt great to meet you and Simon after we graduated from high school. You two have always been dear friends of mine, and always will be.
Anyway, the reason I am writing this letter to you is that I am planning to travel to Egypt. I have wanted to be there since
elementory
school, because
Egypt is one of the ancient civilization in the world. Whatsmore
, the pyramids, one of the seven world wonders
is the secondary reason for me to go to Egypt.I am planning to take my days off from August 28th, which I believe is a Thursday, so I can spend the whole Friday packaging my luggages and preparing for my flight on Saturday early morning. My destination is the international airport of
cairo
at terminal 2.Do you want to come together? I believe there should be a long weekend in the first week of September; therefore we can use 4 days of holiday to take this international trip together.
if you need to know anything else, just get in touch with me as soon as possible. I look forward to hearing from you soon!
Best wishes,
Oliver