IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 7.5

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 7.5 (General Training)

7.5
Overall Score
14 Mar 25, 23:38
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Overall Feedback

The letter effectively communicates the retirement plans and invitation, maintaining a semi-formal tone. However, there are minor grammatical errors and limited vocabulary variety, which slightly affect coherence and lexical resource scores.
Overall score7.5
Grammatical range and accuracy7.0
Lexical resource7.0
Coherence & cohesion7.0
Task response8.0
Total Errors8
Grammatical range and accuracy2
Lexical resource2
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response1

Writing Task

#Retirement Announcement
#Informal
You have decided to retire and want to share the news with your close family friend. Write a letter to them.
Tell them when you will be retiring
Discuss your plans after retirement
Invite them to a retirement dinner

Submitted Answer

Words201|Paragraphs8
English:UK English
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Dear Joe
I hope you and your family are all well! I am keen to meet you since the last trip we went to the United Kingdom which was wonderful. It felt great to meet you and Simon after we graduated. You two have always been dear friends to me, and always will be!
Anyway, I am writing this letter to let you know I am planning to retire after the first week of September because at that time I will have 24 years of experience in this company.
After my retirement, I think a journey with some old friends from high school will be a brilliant idea. After that, my wife suggests me to have a pet, I prefer a dog, you know I am definitely a dog person.
Before travelling to our memory place, I want to invite you to my retirement party, which will be on September 10th. Simon and our other high school friends will also be invited, so we can discuss the trip when we are having dinner!
If you have any question about anything, please feel free to contact me as soon as possible. I look forward to hearing from you soon
!
Best wishes,
Oliver

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