IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 6

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 6 (General Training)

6.0
Overall Score
14 Mar 25, 23:30
Want to practice this question?
Go to IELTS Letter Checker

Overall Feedback

The letter addresses all tasks but contains several grammatical errors and lacks variety in sentence structures. While the ideas are logically organized, the letter could benefit from improved coherence and a wider range of vocabulary.
Overall score6.0
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource6.0
Coherence & cohesion6.0
Task response7.0
Total Errors22
Grammatical range and accuracy8
Lexical resource10
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response1

Writing Task

#Retirement Announcement
#Informal
You have decided to retire and want to share the news with your close family friend. Write a letter to them.
Tell them when you will be retiring
Discuss your plans after retirement
Invite them to a retirement dinner

Submitted Answer

Words204|Paragraphs8
English:UK English
Global Issues:
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Dear Joe
I hope you and your family are all well! I am keen to meet you since the last
trip
we went to the United Kingdom which was wonderful. It felt great to meet you and Simon after we graduated from
high
school
. You two have always been dear friends to me, and always will be!
Anyway, I am writing this letter to let you know I am planning to retire after the first week of September
, because
at that time I will have a 24
years
experience
in this company.
After my retirement, I think a
trip
with some
oldfriends
in
high
school
will be a brilliant idea.
Afterthat
, my wife suggested
me
to have a pet, I
perfer
a dog,
your
know I am definitely a dog person.
Before the
trip
to our
high
school
, I want to invite you to my retirement party, which will be on September 10th. Simon and our other
high
school
friends will also be invited, so we can discuss the
trip
when we are
haveing
the dinner!
If you have any question about anything, please feel free to contact me as soon as
possibile
. I look forward to hearing from you soon
!
Best wishes,
Oliver

Writing Tips That Won't Put You to Sleep

Because learning should be fun, not a cure for insomnia. Check out these articles that might actually make you laugh while you learn.

Tired of English Exam Stress?

Stop staring at blank pages and start writing like a pro! Our AI checker is like having a patient tutor who never gets tired of your mistakes.

Success Rate
89%
Of our users improve their scores
Time Saved
3x
Faster than traditional methods