IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 6.5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 6.5 (General Training)
6.5
Overall Score
14 Mar 25, 23:36
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Overall Feedback
The letter effectively communicates the retirement plans and invitation, but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The structure is logical, but coherence could be improved with smoother transitions. Vocabulary is varied but could be more precise.
| Overall score | 6.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 7.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 15 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5 | |
| Lexical resource | 5 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Writing Task
#Retirement Announcement
#Informal
You have decided to retire and want to share the news with your close family friend. Write a letter to them.
Tell them when you will be retiring
Discuss your plans after retirement
Invite them to a retirement dinner
Submitted Answer
Words202|Paragraphs8
English:
Global Issues:
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Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Joe
I hope you and your family are all well! I am keen to meet you since the last trip we went to the United Kingdom which was wonderful. It felt great to meet you and Simon after we graduated. You two have always been dear friends to me, and always will be!
Anyway, I am writing this letter to let you know I am planning to retire after the first week of September because at that time I will have a 24
year
of experience in this company.After my retirement, I think a journey with some
oldfriends
from high school will be a brilliant idea. After that, my wife suggest
me to have a pet, I prefer a dog, you know I am definitely a dog person.Before
traveling
to our memmory
place, I want to invite you to my retirement party, which will be on September 10th. Simon and our other high school friends will also be invited, so we can discuss the trip when we are having the dinner
!If you have any question about anything, please feel free to contact me as soon as possible. I look forward to hearing from you soon
!
Best wishes,
Oliver