IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5.5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5 (General Training)
5.5
Overall Score
09 Aug 24, 09:02
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses all the bullet points but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Coherence and cohesion are generally maintained, but the logical flow could be improved. Vocabulary usage is adequate but lacks variety.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 16 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 8 | |
| Lexical resource | 3 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
You need to postpone a planned dinner party at your home with your friends. Write a letter to them.
Explain why you need to postpone the dinner party
Suggest a new date
Mention any changes to the menu or theme
#Event Postponement
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:204
Paragraphs:6
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Jiya,
Hope you are doing pretty well, It has been a long time since
i
saw you last. Huge apologies to
postponing the dinner party I have planned at my home for the upcoming weekend. Unfortunately, the dinner needs to be planned some other day due to a mishappening in neighbourhood
. A critical accident took place right beside my house and the road is
blocked by the city of Vancouver until it got fixed.However, parking would be considered as a big issue for every guest visiting. As people were coming from far
away
it seemed to be really difficult to get here via public transport or taxis. It has been decided by me and my family that changing the date to a new one is the best resolution to this issue and
it will be happening on 25 aug
now.Whereas, some modifications to the menu and the theme are made so, the party would be based on authentic north Indian style. You can arrange your clothing accordingly. I really apologize for any inconvenience you will have with this change, I know you have to make some arrangements as well. Thank you, so
much
for you
understanding in advance.Your beloved,
Kirti