IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 7
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 7 (General Training)
7.0
Overall Score
16 Mar 25, 11:27
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Overall Feedback
The letter effectively congratulates the friend and discusses challenges, but contains some grammatical errors and lacks a bit of variety in sentence structures. Vocabulary is appropriate but could be more varied, and the letter maintains a logical flow with good coherence and cohesion.
| Overall score | 7.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 7.0 | |
| Task response | 8.0 |
| Total Errors | 13 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7 | |
| Lexical resource | 2 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Writing Task
#Graduation Congratulations
#Informal
A friend has graduated with a degree in nursing. Write a letter to congratulate them on their success.
Congratulate them on their graduation.
Discuss the challenges they overcame.
Mention your hopes for their bright future.
Submitted Answer
Words162|Paragraphs6
English:
Global Issues:
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Dear Jessica,
Time flies so fast and that time finally has come. Congratulations on your graduation. I am literally over the moon. I knew how hard you have been working for this past four years
and
you have made it this far. Your works paid off. How grateful I am to be your witness of your college journey.Welcome to the real life. There will be plenty of
challeges
you may face in this stage of life. But, I am not worried about you because you have overcame
million
problems during college. You learnt how to argue, lead, negotiate, even stand up for yourself. You have made your mark during college and
now it is on to the next chapter of life.I believe you will be a good nurse in the future. You have
kind
heart and I hope it drives you to do good things to
many people. I wish you the best whenever and wherever you are.Sincerely,
Clara