IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 6
6.0
Overall Score
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses all the bullet points but lacks coherence and cohesion in some parts. There are grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect readability and overall flow. Vocabulary usage is adequate but could be more varied and precise.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 17 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 2 | |
| Lexical resource | 9 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
You recently received a gift from your friend. Write a letter thanking your friend for the gift.
Describe the gift you received
Explain why you like the gift
Mention how you have been using the gift
#Thank You
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:151
Paragraphs:4
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Jared,
I have received the items that you acquired from your trip to Japan. I am writing you this letter in order to express my gratitudes. From what I have observed, you have
gotten
me a plethora of souvenirs. As you most likely remembered my
prefered
choices of delectables, you have
gotten
me, my
favorite
flavor
of crackers; I have taken a liking to the certain brand that you have
gotten
me as I have finished half of the dozen that you
got
me.
It is because of the rich flavor
that the biscuits bring upon my taste buds
none like other brands of the crumbly snacks. Other than that, you have also recalled that I have been in the particular need of bathroom utilitarian items. You have brought me such convenience as I have been making of great use the towel holders that you gifted to me.Sincerely,
Glenn