IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7.5
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 7.5
7.5
Overall Score
03 Aug 24, 19:47
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Overall Feedback
The letter effectively addresses all the tasks with clear and appropriate language. The grammar is accurate and varied, and the letter is well-organized, though it could benefit from slightly more detailed descriptions to enhance engagement.
| Overall score | 7.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 8.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 8.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 8.0 |
| Total Errors | 8 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 1 | |
| Lexical resource | 2 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Question
You want to send festival greetings to a friend who recently moved to a new country. Write a letter to them.
Send your festival greetings
Ask about their new life in the country
Share how you celebrated the festival
Express your wish to visit them soon
#Festival Greetings
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:156
Paragraphs:8
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Dear James,
I hope this letter finds you well and in good spirits. As the festive season approaches, I wanted to send you my warmest greetings and best wishes. I hope you're settling into your
new
life in [New Country] and enjoying the experience of living in a different culture.How has everything been so far? Have you discovered any exciting traditions or made
new
friends? I'm eager to hear all about your adventures and how you're adapting to your new
surroundings.This year, I celebrated the festival with my family. We had a lovely time decorating the house, enjoying delicious food, and exchanging gifts. The atmosphere was filled with joy and warmth, reminding me of the wonderful times we've shared.
I miss you and hope to visit you soon. It would be fantastic to explore [
New
Country] together and create new
memories.Take care and stay in touch!
Warm regards,
Joshua