IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7.5
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 7.5
7.5
Overall Score
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The letter effectively addresses all the tasks with clear and appropriate language. The grammar is accurate and varied, and the letter is well-organized. However, the vocabulary could be slightly more varied to enhance the overall impact.
| Overall score | 7.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 9.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 8.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 7.0 |
| Total Errors | 8 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 0 | |
| Lexical resource | 2 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
Your sibling has won a prestigious award at their workplace. Write a letter to congratulate them.
Congratulate them on the award
Express your pride in their accomplishment
Share a personal anecdote related to their success
#Congratulatory Letter
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:144
Paragraphs:6
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Dear James,
I hope this letter finds you well. I recently heard the fantastic news about you winning the prestigious award at your workplace, and I couldn’t be more thrilled for you! Congratulations on such a well-deserved recognition.
Your dedication and hard work have always been apparent to me, and seeing you receive this award fills me with immense pride. You've always been an inspiration with your commitment and passion for what you do.
I still remember when we were kids, and you spent hours tinkering with your projects,
always
striving for perfection. It’s no surprise to me that your perseverance has led to such a significant achievement. This award is a testament to your incredible talents and determination.Once again, congratulations on your success. I am so proud of you and can’t wait to celebrate together soon.
Alex