IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 7

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 7 (General Training)

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09 Apr 25, 05:56
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Overall Feedback

The letter is well-structured and addresses all tasks with appropriate formality. The vocabulary is varied, and the grammar is accurate, but the coherence could be improved by providing more specific details about the course change reason.
Overall score7.0
Grammatical range and accuracy8.0
Lexical resource8.0
Coherence & cohesion6.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors12
Grammatical range and accuracy1
Lexical resource3
Coherence & cohesion4
Task response4

Writing Task

#Course Registration
#Formal
You need to change the course you registered for to a different one.
Introduce yourself and state the course you initially registered for
Explain why you need to change the course
Request the procedure for changing courses

Submitted Answer

Words128|Paragraphs6
English:US English
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Dear
I hope this message finds you well. My name is [Your Full Name], and I am currently registered for [Course Name] in the [Department Name] for the [semester/year].
I am writing to request a change in my
course
registration.
After further consideration, I have realized that [reason for changing the
course
, e.g., the
course
schedule conflicts with another class, the
course
content is not aligned with my academic goals, or I believe another
course
would better suit my interests and career aspirations].
Could you please provide me with the procedure for changing
courses
, including any deadlines or necessary forms? I would greatly appreciate your guidance in this matter.
Thank you for your time and assistance. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Best regards,

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