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IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)

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Grammatical range and accuracy	5.0
Lexical resource	6.0
Coherence & cohesion	5.0
Task response	4.0

Writing Task

#Hotel Complaint

#Formal

You had an issue with the hotel’s customer service during your stay.

Describe the interaction you had with the staff.

Explain why you were dissatisfied with the service.

Suggest how the hotel can improve its customer service.

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Dear Hyatt Team,

Hope you are doing well.

my recent trip to Jammu and Kashmir I had booking in your

hotel

and I want to bring this issue to you that I had a very bad experience during my stay. The staff working there were very disrespectful and were not paying attention to the customers, the services which included in my package

was

not the same which we had given.

And

I'm

writing this with very

dissappointing

that

there was some items

missing from our room, while the staff used to come to clean the room. Despite addressing the issue to the

hotel

management

there was no action taken by them.

I hope you come up with

better

solution for my issue that I had during my stay. I would also recommend that you train your staff on how to give customer service and the

hotel

manager to manage the

hotel

I'll

be waiting for your response.

Thank You.

Regards,

Deepa Shukla.

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Total Errors	18
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Lexical resource	5
Coherence & cohesion	3
Task response	4