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IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)

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07 Apr 25, 04:02
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Overall Feedback

The letter addresses the task but lacks clarity and organization, with several grammatical errors affecting readability. Vocabulary is limited and repetitive, and the letter does not fully cover all bullet points, particularly in suggesting improvements.
Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors26
Grammatical range and accuracy11
Lexical resource6
Coherence & cohesion4
Task response4

Writing Task

#Hotel Reservation
#Informal
You stayed at a hotel where the housekeeping services were not satisfactory. Write a letter to the hotel manager to provide feedback.
Describe the issues with housekeeping
Explain how it affected your stay
Suggest ways to improve housekeeping services

Submitted Answer

Words158|Paragraphs2
English:UK English
Global Issues:
Paragraph Count Requirement
Formality Match
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Incorrect or Missing Opening
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Hotel Manager,
It's been weeks that I am
staying
in your Hotel
and
it seems that the housekeeping services
is
not efficient to cater their services. As a customer, it's my
priviledged
to have a good and comfortable stay
but
seemingly I'm not at ease to
stay
. The latter should make sure every
rooms
cleanliness for the customers
benefits
not a burden. It should start from the bed linens to the comfort room for the satisfaction of every client. The comfort and ease of
staying
are the main focus of every Hotel and
it's
services. Every
housekeeing
must
possesses
the skills that
sets
the comfort of every client. And as a housekeeper, they must be observant and efficient to
forsee
the needs of every client they
have
either it's a short or long
stay
. Customers have the right to have a comfortable stay to regain
strenght
and
having
a peace of mind.

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