IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6.5
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 6.5
6.5
Overall Score
04 Aug 24, 00:38
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The letter effectively addresses the task requirements and maintains a formal tone. However, there are minor grammatical errors and the vocabulary could be more varied to enhance the overall quality. The logical flow and coherence are good, but slight improvements could be made for a higher score.
| Overall score | 6.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 6.0 |
| Total Errors | 12 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 3 | |
| Lexical resource | 2 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
You have an interview for a job position, but you need to reschedule due to a prior engagement.
Tell why you need to reschedule.
Suggest a new date and time.
Express your apologies for any inconvenience caused.
#Appointment Change
#Formal
Submitted Answer
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Words:92
Paragraphs:7
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Dear
[
Himansh,I am writing to request a
reschedule
of our scheduled interview on [original date and time] for the [job title] position.Unfortunately, an unforeseen and unavoidable prior commitment has arisen that conflicts with our scheduled interview time.
I apologize for any inconvenience this may cause and understand if this requires adjustments on your end. I would be available to interview on [suggested date] at [suggested time].
Thank you for your understanding and flexibility. I look forward to the opportunity to discuss my qualifications further with you.
Sincerely,
[Your Name]
thhim