IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 6
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 6 (General Training)
6.0
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses all bullet points but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. While the ideas are logically organized, the coherence and cohesion could be improved with better transitions and sentence structures.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 6.0 |
| Total Errors | 25 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 12 | |
| Lexical resource | 7 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Writing Task
#Travel Plans
#Semi-Formal
Your friend has invited you to visit their city and stay with them for a few days. Unfortunately, you have to decline the invitation due to work commitments. Write a letter to your friend.
Thank your friend for the invitation
Explain why you cannot come
Suggest another time to visit
Submitted Answer
Words168|Paragraphs7
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Dear Hariza,
I hope you are doing well my friend
and
I am so grateful that you invited me to visit Murree, to have some quality time with you. I have been looking forward to meet
you for past
one year.I feel sad to let you know that I
will unable
to come. As you
konw
I recently switched my job and there was
alot
of pending work is left in the department to do
and
I ensure my boss to complete all the work by this month, and if
i
do
there
will be chances of getting promoted.
As you already know
life is so hard these days because of inflation
so, I do not want to miss this golden opportunity.I am
planningt
to come in december
, if you are available in december
then
acknowledge me. We will be having so much fun because there will have been snow fall in december
so
we will have so many activities to do.Love,
From,
Fariha Khan