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IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5 (General Training)

5.5
Overall Score
30 Mar 25, 02:52
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Overall Feedback

The letter addresses the task but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. While the structure is generally clear, the coherence and cohesion could be improved with better transitions and more precise language.
Overall score5.5
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource6.0
Coherence & cohesion6.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors19
Grammatical range and accuracy8
Lexical resource5
Coherence & cohesion4
Task response2

Writing Task

#Thank a Colleague
#Informal
A colleague assisted you with a difficult report. Write a letter to thank your colleague.
Mention the report and its importance
Describe the help your colleague provided
Express your thanks and appreciation

Submitted Answer

Words183|Paragraphs7
English:UK English
Global Issues:
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Gerome,
The report regarding the employees complaining about the parking issue was submitted to the company manager
and
it was quite difficult but was a success because of your help.
We made the report to inform the company that most of the
empolyees
have a problem regarding the limited parking space and forced them to work riding a bus or by train. This has been largely inconvenient since the public transport system of our city is very inefficient. This has resulted in many workers to coming to
office
late and thus affecting their overall performance and productivity.
Since you helped me write the report, our company manager talked to the higher ups regarding the parking problems and will help our colleagues
of
the said problem.
I
really
appreciate your help that helped many of our colleagues from work and would like to treat you to lunch on May 7 to express my thanks, if
your'e
not
avaialble
on the said
date
you can just notify me via messenger
when
would you like to have our lunch
.
Yours Truly,
James T. Rudy

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