IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
5.0
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08 Nov 24, 10:39
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the task but lacks coherence and cohesion, with abrupt transitions and unclear connections between ideas. Grammar and vocabulary usage are limited, with several errors affecting clarity and formality, which does not fully match the semi-formal requirement.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 25 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 15 | |
| Lexical resource | 3 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
You have decided to retire and want to let your book club friend know. Write a letter to them.
Tell them when you will be retiring
Discuss your plans for the future
Suggest a book club celebration
#Retirement Announcement
#Informal
Submitted Answer
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Paragraphs:4
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Dear Friends
This is to inform you that. I am going to retire from my position in the coming July month. As you are my childhood friends
and
you know that I was posted in
a food manufacturing company as a quality assurance manager. It was very hard
to tell you guys because we all have a very wonderful memories
. After retirement
I am plaining to visit my sons
home which is located in delhi
and after that. I am planing to go for abroad trip as it was my long term
wish to have a
abroad trip. Although before going I want to meet you people and celebrate our friendship. I am searching some
of the club
for celebration and also the location of the club because it not
easy to
all of us to come to a long distance. So we meet at one point and after that
we will go for
spice club where we all have dinner and celebrate.Hope you all join the celebration and have some cheer full memories with me.
Cheers to our friendship!