IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)

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08 Nov 24, 06:39
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Overall Feedback

The letter addresses the task but lacks coherence and cohesion, with abrupt transitions and unclear connections between ideas. Grammar and vocabulary usage are limited, with several errors affecting clarity and formality, which does not fully match the semi-formal requirement.
Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors25
Grammatical range and accuracy15
Lexical resource3
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response3

Writing Task

#Retirement Announcement
#Informal
You have decided to retire and want to let your book club friend know. Write a letter to them.
Tell them when you will be retiring
Discuss your plans for the future
Suggest a book club celebration

Submitted Answer

Words181|Paragraphs4
English:UK English
Global Issues:
Formality Match
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Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
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Incorrect or Missing Opening
Dear Friends
This is to inform you that. I am going to retire from my position in the coming July month. As you are my childhood friends
and
you know that I was posted
in
a food manufacturing company as a quality assurance manager. It was very
hard
to tell you guys because we all have
a very wonderful memories
. After
retirement
I am plaining to visit my
sons
home which is located in
delhi
and after that. I am planing to go for abroad trip as it was my
long term
wish to have
a
abroad trip. Although before going I want to meet you people and celebrate our friendship. I am searching
some
of the
club
for celebration and also the location of the club because
it not
easy
to
all of us to come to a long distance. So we meet at one point and
after that
we will go
for
spice club where we all have dinner and celebrate.
Hope you all join the celebration and have some cheer full memories with me.
Cheers to our friendship!

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