IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 7
7.0
Overall Score
09 Aug 24, 09:05
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Overall Feedback
The letter is well-structured and addresses all the bullet points effectively. The grammar is accurate and varied, and the vocabulary is appropriate for a semi-formal letter. However, the explanation for the postponement could be more detailed for better task achievement.
| Overall score | 7.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 8.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 8.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 9 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 1 | |
| Lexical resource | 2 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
You need to postpone a planned dinner party at your home with your friends. Write a letter to them.
Explain why you need to postpone the dinner party
Suggest a new date
Mention any changes to the menu or theme
#Event Postponement
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:132
Paragraphs:9
Word Count Requirement
Linking Devices
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Friends,
I'm so disappointed to have to do this, but I need to postpone our dinner party on [original date].
[Briefly explain the reason for the postponement, e.g., unexpected work commitment, family emergency, illness].
I know this is last minute and I apologize for any inconvenience this may cause. I was really looking forward to spending time with all of you and catching up.
I’m thinking we could reschedule for [new date]. This would give us [reason for
new
date, e.g., more time to prepare, ensure everyone is available].I’m planning to keep the same menu, as I’m already excited about it!
Again,
I’m truly sorry for
any disruption this causes. I can’t wait to celebrate with you all soon.Best,
[Your name]