IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
5.0
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses all tasks but lacks coherence and has several grammatical errors. Vocabulary is basic, and the letter could benefit from improved structure and formality to enhance readability.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 32 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 18 | |
| Lexical resource | 6 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
You want to visit an old college friend in another country. Write a letter to your friend.
Inform them of your travel plans.
Mention the duration of your stay.
Ask for suggestions on what to do while there.
#Travel Plans
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:158
Paragraphs:6
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Dear Friend
i am writing to
your
to inform you about my travel plan to visit your country ,
i
am really considering be there on Dec before the end of year holidays ,
i
will be booking a flight
between 15 to 20
december
.
i
will share the flight information later as soon as finish booking . will
be great if you can meet me at the airport .i planning to stay for two weeks before
i
return to my country as i
have commentment
to work so we need to stick with the two weeks plans .can you please let me know what kind of activities are
availiable
during my time of visit ? do
you have any suggesttions
about what could be done ? any
places to visit ? .looking forward
to see
you soon my friend , and please let me know if you need anything from here so i
can bring it with me.take care and see you soon