IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 7

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 7 (General Training)

7.0
Overall Score
29 Mar 25, 21:51
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Overall Feedback

The letter effectively congratulates the friend and comments on their talent, but could better address future art projects. Grammar is mostly accurate with a good range, though some sentences could be more concise. Vocabulary is varied but could be more precise in places.
Overall score7.0
Grammatical range and accuracy8.0
Lexical resource7.0
Coherence & cohesion7.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors8
Grammatical range and accuracy2
Lexical resource1
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response2

Writing Task

#Congratulatory Letter
#Informal
Your friend has won a local art competition. Write a letter to congratulate them.
Congratulate them on winning the competition
Comment on their artistic talent
Ask about their future art projects

Submitted Answer

Words154|Paragraphs5
English:UK English
Global Issues:
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Friend,
I am writing to congratulate you for winning the art competition that took place in the area locally. I cannot express my excitement and how proud I am of you for winning this competition. I am fully aware of your explicit talent and how hard you've worked to be where you are today. I've seen since childhood how you always indulged more into artistic visions than others. I know you weren't born with this talent but your ability to nurture and learn is what makes you so unique.
Winning this competition is definitely a great achievement in your career. I read in the newspaper that the winners will get a chance to collaborate with one the biggest art publishers in the city. I want to see how you move from here, as in, what will be your next step? Are you willing
move
forward with them?
Yours lovingly
Jaspinder

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