IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)

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08 Aug 24, 20:56
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The letter addresses the tasks but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Coherence and cohesion are moderate, but the vocabulary usage is limited and sometimes incorrect.
Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy4.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors19
Grammatical range and accuracy7
Lexical resource3
Coherence & cohesion5
Task response3

Writing Task

#Thank Family
#Informal
Your family helped you celebrate a special occasion. Write a letter to thank them.
Thank them for making the occasion special
Mention any memorable moments from the celebration
Invite them to a future celebration

Submitted Answer

Words150|Paragraphs1
English:US English
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Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Family, thank you for all of
your
participate to help me decorate and modified my new apartments.
I am so glad that you guys came along with me last week
, because
I think I do not know
and
I do not want to know what kind of bad things can be happened if all of you did not help me back there.
It was fun back there, how we
paint
the wall together, how we mop the floor together, how we
clean
the ceiling together, and of
course
when we modified the room to be more aesthetic and look-astonishing. On the next future event, I would like to invite all of you again so that we can meet up again, and I will prepare a
raosted
turkeys and bacon for our next celebration meetings on Thanksgiving feast. Come join me and
do not forget
, see you next month.

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