IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 5
5.0
Overall Score
08 Aug 24, 23:56
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The letter addresses the tasks but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Coherence and cohesion are moderate, but the vocabulary usage is limited and sometimes incorrect.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 19 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7 | |
| Lexical resource | 3 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
Your family helped you celebrate a special occasion. Write a letter to thank them.
Thank them for making the occasion special
Mention any memorable moments from the celebration
Invite them to a future celebration
#Thank Family
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:150
Paragraphs:1
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Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Family, thank you for all of
your
participate to help me decorate and modified my new apartments. I am so glad that you guys came along with me last week
, because
I think I do not know
and
I do not want to know what kind of bad things can be happened if all of you did not help me back there.
It was fun back there, how we paint
the wall together, how we mop the floor together, how we clean
the ceiling together, and of course
when we modified the room to be more aesthetic and look-astonishing. On the next future event, I would like to invite all of you again so that we can meet up again, and I will prepare a raosted
turkeys and bacon for our next celebration meetings on Thanksgiving feast. Come join me and do not forget
, see you next month.