IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7.5
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 7.5
7.5
Overall Score
08 Jul 24, 20:12
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Overall Feedback
The letter is well-structured and covers all the required points with a good range of vocabulary and accurate grammar. However, the coherence could be slightly improved by better linking some ideas and providing more detailed descriptions in certain areas.
| Overall score | 7.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 9.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 8.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 11 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
You are moving to a new city to start a new chapter in your life. Write a letter to your friend to let them know about your move.
Explain the reason for the new chapter
Describe the new city
Share your feelings about the move
#Moving Notice
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:235
Paragraphs:7
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Emma,
I hope this letter finds you well. I wanted to share some exciting news with you—I’m moving to a
new
city to begin a fresh chapter in my life. After much contemplation, I have decided to embrace a new
opportunity that promises both professional growth and personal fulfillment
.The
new
city I am moving to is Brighton. It’s a vibrant and lively place, known for its beautiful coastline, historic architecture, and bustling arts scene. The city’s energy is contagious, with an abundance of cafes
, shops, and cultural events that make it a wonderful place to explore and live. I’ve already found a cozy
apartment
close to the beach, and I can’t wait to experience the stunning sunsets and the refreshing sea breeze.I must admit, the move brings a mix of emotions. On one hand, I am thrilled about the
new
adventures and opportunities that lie ahead. On the other hand, I will miss the familiarity of home and the close-knit circle of friends, especially you. However, I am optimistic that this change will lead to growth and new
friendships.I am looking forward to sharing more about this journey with you and would love for you to visit once I’m settled in. Your support means the world to me, and I am excited to see where this
new
chapter takes me.Warm regards,
Joshua