IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 7.5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 7.5 (General Training)
7.5
Overall Score
17 Mar 25, 19:41
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Overall Feedback
The letter effectively addresses the task, providing necessary details about the child's age and health history, and requesting an appointment. However, there are minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect clarity. The vocabulary is adequate but could be more varied to enhance the letter's quality.
| Overall score | 7.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 7.0 | |
| Task response | 8.0 |
| Total Errors | 7 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 2 | |
| Lexical resource | 1 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Writing Task
#Doctor Appointment
#Semi-Formal
You need to get a routine check-up for your child. Write a letter to your pediatrician's office.
Mention your child's age and health history
Request an appointment for a routine check-up
Ask about any necessary preparations or documents
Submitted Answer
Words175|Paragraphs7
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Dear Dr Simon,
I am writing to express my concern about my kid. I want to book a monthly check-up for him, since the last physical examination was 3 weeks ago.
My son Joe will become 8 years old after this birthday on this Friday. His physical health history had been excellent, but last week his teacher told us Joe's left eye was hit by a tennis ball when he was playing in the playground. So, for this time, I want to do a vision check for him.
I would appreciate it if you could book an appointment together with the eye check after next weekend. I am lack of time to do the check-up on this week, as the whole family are preparing for his birthday.
I will bring his new identification card and medical record with him. If there is anything more needed from me, please do not hesitate to contact me. Thanking you in advance for your help, I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely
Oliver