IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 6
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 6 (General Training)
6.0
Overall Score
17 Mar 25, 19:08
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the main tasks but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, affecting clarity. Improved coherence and cohesion, along with a wider range of vocabulary, would enhance the overall quality of the letter.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 15 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 6 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Writing Task
#Doctor Appointment
#Semi-Formal
You need to get a routine check-up for your child. Write a letter to your pediatrician's office.
Mention your child's age and health history
Request an appointment for a routine check-up
Ask about any necessary preparations or documents
Submitted Answer
Words175|Paragraphs7
English:
Global Issues:
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Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Dr Simon,
I am writing to express my concern about my kid. I want to book a monthly check-up for him, since the last physical examination was 3
weeks
ago.My son Joe will become 8 years old after this
brithday
on this Friday. His physical health history had been excelente
, but last week
his tearcher
told us Joe's left eye was hitted
by a tennis ball when he was playing in the playground. So, for this time, I want to do a vision check for him.I would appreciate it if you could book
a
appointment together with the eye check after next week
. I am lack of time to do the check-up on this week
, as the whole family are preparing for his birthday.I will bring his new identification card and medical record with him. If there is anything more needed from me
please
do not hesitate to contact me. Thanking you in advance for your help, I look forward to hearing from you soon.Yours sincerely
Oliver