IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 6
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 6 (General Training)
6.0
Overall Score
18 Aug 24, 00:36
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses all the bullet points but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The coherence and cohesion are adequate, but the vocabulary usage is somewhat limited and repetitive.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 6.0 |
| Total Errors | 21 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 8 | |
| Lexical resource | 7 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
You have an appointment with your dentist next week, but due to a work commitment, you need to reschedule it.
Explain why you need to reschedule.
Suggest a new date and time.
Apologize for any inconvenience caused.
#Appointment Change
#Formal
Submitted Answer
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Words:147
Paragraphs:7
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Dear Dr. Ken,
This letter is written by me to request a rescheduled appointment for my dental needs. Which is booked for this
sunday
at 11 AM but
unfortunately
my work schedule is conflicting with my commitment at the clinic. However, I tried my best to make arrangements with them but
it was planned prior to
this. Due to which no changes can be made by the employer.I can make my clinic visit to work on
an another day
which can be the upcoming weekend on 24th of august at any time of your availability.I can understand that it requires some other modifications on your end to find something for
me
and i
really apologize for any inconvenience that caused at
this sudden adjustment.Truely appreciate your
coperation
with me in regards to
the routine check up. Thank you, for understanding.Your's Sincerely,
Kirti