IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
5.0
Overall Score
06 Nov 24, 17:00
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the tasks but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Coherence and cohesion are affected by unclear transitions and some disorganized ideas, while vocabulary usage is basic and sometimes incorrect.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 28 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 8 | |
| Lexical resource | 13 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
You borrowed a book from a friend and found it very helpful. Write a letter to thank them.
Thank your friend for lending you the book
Explain how the book was helpful
Offer to lend them a book in return
#Thank You
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:168
Paragraphs:11
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Dear Donald,
I hope this letter finds you well.
I'm
really
grateful to have borrow
me your english
's book.I've
just passed my B2 exam yesterday and I think that I succeeded!First of all, The
advices
in grammar and vocabulary were truly helpful.Secondly, I could
pratice
many exercices
into the book and I could progress very quickly. It'
was very hard
to learn and do that all day but
I'm
happy because, today, I can udpate
my CV with this diplom
!Accordingly, all will be right for going to Harvard next year
!
Other topic, but I remember me when we have spoken about your psychologic problems named "Overthinking". I thought about you and I have discovered a famous book that it can give you great
advices
for improve
your mental healthy. His name is "20 advices
for stop overthinking".I would like to bring you next week when we are in Münich.
I'm
looking forward to seeing you again.Greetings