IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5
5.5
Overall Score
18 Aug 24, 07:02
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the main points but lacks detail and clarity in some areas. There are several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect readability and coherence. Vocabulary usage is basic and could be more varied.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 21 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 9 | |
| Lexical resource | 5 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
You recently visited your doctor and would like to provide feedback on your experience. Write a letter to your doctor's office.
Describe your recent visit
Provide positive and/or negative feedback
Suggest improvements if necessary
#Doctor Appointment
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:139
Paragraphs:7
Word Count Requirement
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Doctor Samson
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction
about
my recent visit to your office on 28 February 2024.I arrived at your clinic at 9 am that day. Although there were some patients waiting before I arrived , I expected to be seen by you since I had
made
an appointment a couple days
before. Unfortuately
, I needed to wait for about one and a half hour
in order to be seen by you. I seemed that the receptionist have
ignored my appointment and stick
to her "First come, first serve
" principle. I was doubtful about the use of making
an appointment in this case.Please be noted that my personal information was as following. I would like you could give me
response
and review you
clinic precedures
.Name : Tommy Chow
Patient number : 1234567
Contact number: 66234567