IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 6
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 6 (General Training)
6.0
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the task but contains grammatical errors and lacks variety in sentence structures. Vocabulary is adequate but could be more varied, and the letter's coherence and cohesion could be improved with better logical flow and paragraphing.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 6.0 |
| Total Errors | 22 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6 | |
| Lexical resource | 11 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Question
You need to arrange for childcare services. Write a letter to a local daycare center.
Describe your childcare needs
Specify the hours and days required
Inquire about availability and costs
#Service Request
#Formal
Submitted Answer
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Words:172
Paragraphs:8
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Dear Daycare manager,
I'm
writing you today because I'm
looking for childcare service
, and I'm
wondering about certain aspects.Right now
I'm
seeking for this service
because I have plenty of tasks to develop, due to my multiple occupations. Therefore, my little 4 year old
would be lacking care. She needs to do school assignments, and she currently requires reinforcement in certain activities. Such as learning vocabulary and social behaviour.I'll
be requiring this
service
from Monday to Friday, right after she gets out of
kindergarden
which would be at 2 pm, and I would pick her up after 6 pm
, however
I'm
glad you could advise me about your availability these days.
Then, asking all this, you
can aware
me about the costs, and, if extra time adds any cost, I won't
complain to pay for.I would be so grateful for you to offer me this kind of
service
and inform me if you have any other advise
for this need.Sincerelly,
Angie.