IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 6
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 6 (General Training)
6.0
Overall Score
30 Oct 24, 02:46
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the task but lacks clarity and precision in grammar and vocabulary. Improved coherence and cohesion would enhance the logical flow and readability.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 16 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6 | |
| Lexical resource | 4 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
You need to arrange for childcare services. Write a letter to a local daycare center.
Describe your childcare needs
Specify the hours and days required
Inquire about availability and costs
#Service Request
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:174
Paragraphs:8
Formality Match
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Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Daycare manager,
I am writing
you
today because I am looking for childcare
service, and I wonder about certain aspects.Right now I am seeking for this benefit because I have plenty of tasks to develop, due to my multiple occupations. Therefore, my little
4 year old
would be lacking care. She needs to do school assignments, and she currently requires reinforcement in certain activities. Such as learning vocabulary and social behaviour.I will be requiring this assistance from Monday to Friday, right after she gets out of
kindergarden
which would be at 2 pm. And I would pick her up about after 6 pm, however,
I am glad you could advise me about your availability these days.Then, asking all this, you can make me aware about the costs, and, if extra time adds any cost, I
won't
complain to pay for it.I would be so grateful for you to offer me this kind of service and inform me if you have any other information for this need.
Sincerelly,
Angie.