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IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 8.5

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 8.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 8.5 (General Training)

8.5
Overall Score
07 Apr 25, 06:46
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The letter effectively addresses all tasks with clear and concise language, maintaining a semi-formal tone. While the vocabulary is varied, further enhancement could improve lexical richness, and the coherence could be slightly improved by refining transitions between sections.
Overall score8.5
Grammatical range and accuracy9.0
Lexical resource8.0
Coherence & cohesion8.0
Task response8.0
Total Errors6
Grammatical range and accuracy0
Lexical resource3
Coherence & cohesion2
Task response1

Writing Task

#Subscription Renewal
#Semi-Formal
You have been receiving a monthly DIY magazine and it is time to renew your subscription. Write to the subscription office.
Express your interest in continuing the subscription.
Inquire about any new sections being added.
Ask for the renewal process.

Submitted Answer

Words266|Paragraphs7
English:UK English
Global Issues:
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Logical Flow
Dear DIY Mag,
I hope you are doing well. I am writing to express my interest in renewing my
subscription
. I have been a loyal subscriber for the past 2 years, and I truly enjoy receiving and reading the magazine each month. The variety of topics and the high-quality content have consistently provided me with valuable ideas and inspiration for my DIY projects. I look forward to the magazine’s arrival every month, and I would love to continue receiving it in the upcoming
subscription
period.
As I approach the renewal process, I am also curious to know if there are any new sections or features being added to the magazine in the near future. Over the course of my
subscription
, I have greatly enjoyed the diverse range of DIY projects, tips, and articles, and I am eager to hear if there will be any exciting additions, such as new themes, topics, or special features. Knowing about any updates would help me better plan for the next year of reading.
Additionally, I would appreciate some information regarding the
subscription
renewal process.
Could you please outline the steps for renewing my
subscription
?
Is there a specific deadline I should be aware of, and are there any discounts or special offers for renewing subscribers? I would also like to inquire if there have been any changes to the pricing or the terms of the
subscription
for the new period.
Thank you for your time and assistance. I look forward to hearing from you soon and continuing to enjoy DIY Mag for another year.
Best regards,
Rea Dahiroc

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