IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7.5

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IELTS Letter Sample Band 7.5

7.5
Overall Score
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The letter is well-structured and addresses all the required tasks effectively. The grammar is accurate, and the vocabulary is appropriate for a semi-formal context. However, the coherence could be slightly improved by adding more transitional phrases.

Overall score7.5
Grammatical range and accuracy8.0
Lexical resource7.0
Coherence & cohesion8.0
Task response7.0
Total Errors10
Grammatical range and accuracy1
Lexical resource4
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response2
Question
You have been invited to give a lecture at a conference, but due to a personal emergency, you need to reschedule. Write a letter to the conference organizer explaining the situation.
Inform about the personal emergency
Suggest alternative dates for the lecture
Express your willingness to cooperate with the new schedule
#Event Postponement
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
English:UK English
Words:130
Paragraphs:9
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Dear [Conference Organizer's Name],
I am writing to formally request a postponement of my scheduled lecture on [topic] at the [
conference
name]
conference
.
Due to an unforeseen personal emergency, I am unable to
fulfill
my speaking engagement on the originally planned
date
of [
date
]. I understand that this is short notice, and I apologize for any inconvenience this may cause.
I would be available to give the lecture on [alternative
date
1] or [alternative
date
2]. I am also flexible with other
dates
and
am
happy to work with the
conference
schedule to find a mutually convenient time.
Thank you for your understanding. I look forward to the opportunity to share my insights with the
conference
attendees at a later
date
.
Sincerely,
[Your Name]
[Your Title/Affiliation]
[Contact Information]