IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 7.5

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 7.5 (General Training)

7.5
Overall Score
09 Aug 24, 06:28
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Overall Feedback

The letter is well-structured and addresses all the required tasks effectively. The grammar is accurate, and the vocabulary is appropriate for a semi-formal context. However, the coherence could be slightly improved by adding more transitional phrases.
Overall score7.5
Grammatical range and accuracy8.0
Lexical resource7.0
Coherence & cohesion8.0
Task response7.0
Total Errors10
Grammatical range and accuracy1
Lexical resource4
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response2

Writing Task

#Event Postponement
#Semi-Formal
You have been invited to give a lecture at a conference, but due to a personal emergency, you need to reschedule. Write a letter to the conference organizer explaining the situation.
Inform about the personal emergency
Suggest alternative dates for the lecture
Express your willingness to cooperate with the new schedule

Submitted Answer

Words130|Paragraphs9
English:UK English
Global Issues:
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Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Logical Flow
Dear [Conference Organizer's Name],
I am writing to formally request a postponement of my scheduled lecture on [topic] at the [
conference
name]
conference
.
Due to an unforeseen personal emergency, I am unable to
fulfill
my speaking engagement on the originally planned
date
of [
date
]. I understand that this is short notice, and I apologize for any inconvenience this may cause.
I would be available to give the lecture on [alternative
date
1] or [alternative
date
2]. I am also flexible with other
dates
and
am
happy to work with the
conference
schedule to find a mutually convenient time.
Thank you for your understanding. I look forward to the opportunity to share my insights with the
conference
attendees at a later
date
.
Sincerely,
[Your Name]
[Your Title/Affiliation]
[Contact Information]

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