IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 6

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 6 (General Training)

6.0
Overall Score
28 Mar 25, 19:49
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Overall Feedback

The letter addresses the task but lacks a formal beginning and signature, affecting coherence. Grammar and vocabulary are adequate but could be more varied and precise to enhance clarity and formality.
Overall score6.0
Grammatical range and accuracy6.0
Lexical resource6.0
Coherence & cohesion6.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors14
Grammatical range and accuracy3
Lexical resource4
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response3

Writing Task

#Thank a Colleague
#Informal
A colleague helped you resolve a conflict at work. Write a letter to thank your colleague.
Explain the conflict situation
Describe how your colleague assisted
Express your gratitude

Submitted Answer

Words207|Paragraphs6
English:US English
Global Issues:
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Grammar Range
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Incorrect or Missing Opening
Dear Colleague;
I'm writing this letter with the sole purpose of thanking you for the help you have offered with the previous conflict I have had at work.
As you may remember, the conflict was caused by miscommunication. I had not received the memo of the minutes I was meant to sign. So when the
supervisor
arrived yelling with a disastrous attitude, I was not able to gather the words to explain myself due to the troubles I am facing at home currently.
Just then, you stood up for me, explaining the whole situation to the
supervisor
. Quickly, he
apologised
and promised this miscommunication would not happen again.
This was
handful
of help for both the
supervisor
and me. Now, thanks to you, the communication at work improved completely, meaning that there won't be any other worker
that
gets scolded by the
supervisor
thanks to a problem of miscommunication.
Due to your help, my gratitude could never get any bigger. Through time, you have helped to solve misunderstandings at work and to ease cooperation daily. And I am hoping that this will help for your salary to increase, just what you have been looking up to
recently
as you had told me some weeks ago.

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