IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 6
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 6 (General Training)
6.0
Overall Score
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses the main points but lacks clarity and precision in language. There are grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect coherence and cohesion, and the vocabulary is somewhat limited.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 13 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 3 | |
| Lexical resource | 3 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
You have decided to cancel your membership at a local running club. Write a letter to the club manager.
State the purpose of your letter
Explain the reason for your decision
Request a refund for any remaining membership period
Ask for confirmation of the cancellation
#Membership Cancellation
#Formal
Submitted Answer
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Words:141
Paragraphs:6
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Dear Club Manger,
I hope this letter finds you well.
I am writing this in order to explain my position on the cancellation of my
membership
. I have been giving it some though for a while, and I understand that it is best for me to cancel the
membership
at the local running club. While I do think that running helped me stay healthy and maintain a diet, there are a few important factors in my life which, unfortunately, could not be overlooked.I hope to
recieve
a refund on any remaining membership
, if applicable. I do believe I have two, maybe three months of payed
membership
, therefore getting a refund would probably be for the best.Thank you for understanding. I understand you will send me a letter of confirmation of the cancellation order on my electronic mail.
Yours Sincerely,