IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5.5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5 (General Training)
5.5
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23 Sept 24, 10:14
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses all the bullet points but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Coherence and cohesion are generally good, but the letter could benefit from better organization and more varied vocabulary.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 17 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 3 | |
| Lexical resource | 9 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
You need to take some time off for a medical procedure. Write a letter to your supervisor requesting vacation leave.
Describe the medical procedure
Mention the dates you need to be off work
Assure your supervisor that you will be reachable in case of emergencies
#Vacation Request
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:167
Paragraphs:7
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Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
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Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Chathurika,
I am writing to bring in to your kind notice that, I have to go under an eye operation due to early stage of Catract. This process will take about 2 weeks to recover after the treatment and I need to prepare myself for 2 days before, by reducing
suger
level of the body and applying eye drops every after 6 hours.Hereby,
I kindly requesting
for 3 weeks leave, including the recovary
period. As per the dates issued by the doctor, my operation will be held on 1st October 2024. And , I am planning to return to work on 28th October 2024.However, I have allocated all my work
amoung
Poornima and Akila during my absence. I have completed the interview process for marketing departmentand
the onboarding procedure will be conducted by Alex. Moreover, during my leave, for any offical
matters you can reach me through my mobile and I will be on call.Appriciating your favourable
responce
in thia
regard
Thank you
Binuki