IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 5
5.0
Overall Score
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The letter addresses the main points but lacks formality and has several grammatical errors. The coherence and cohesion are moderate, and the vocabulary is basic with some errors. Improving formality and correcting grammatical mistakes would enhance the overall quality.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 26 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5 | |
| Lexical resource | 11 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 5 |
Question
A member of your sports team is applying for a sports scholarship and has asked for your recommendation.
Describe your relationship with the team member
Highlight their sports achievements and dedication
Explain why they deserve the scholarship
#Recommendation Letter
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:129
Paragraphs:8
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Dear Bob
I heard the
wonderfull
news you are applying for the scholarship at our sports academy.I've
been in the team for over past
five years, we are like a family here and
I would say you'll
love it in here.There is
not doubt
you will get the scholarship, your dedication and perseverance in sports has always amazed me.I remember the time you won the gold in
athletism
three years in a row, thats
the prized you paid off after all those years of hard training and discipline.You better than no one deserve the scholarship
becuase
there is more of you to being seeing.I'm
looking fowarward
to hearing from you soon with the news you are in.With love, your friend.