IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 7

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 7 (General Training)

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05 Aug 24, 12:18
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Overall Feedback

The letter covers all the required points and maintains a semi-formal tone. However, there are several grammatical errors and some awkward phrasing that affect readability and coherence. Vocabulary usage is good but could be more varied.
Overall score7.0
Grammatical range and accuracy6.0
Lexical resource7.0
Coherence & cohesion7.0
Task response7.0
Total Errors11
Grammatical range and accuracy1
Lexical resource6
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response1

Writing Task

You are hosting a dinner party at your home. Write an invitation letter to a colleague from work.
1
Explain the occasion for the dinner party
2
Provide the date and time
3
Mention the menu or any special dishes
4
Request an RSVP
#Invitation Letter
#Informal

Submitted Answer

Words156|Paragraphs6
English:UK English
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Dear Ben,
I hope you are coping well and start to suit in well in the company. I write this letter to you to
officially
invite you to join me and my wife's first anniversary together. I seriously want to thank you as a friend for your constant advice and feedbacks before
i
got married to my wife. Take this party as an official appreciation.
The party will be next Friday, 7.00p.m. at my place, 3A, Jalan IJ2, 1/1, Taman Indah Jaya 2, 36000 Perak. As fellow eating mates, you should consider yourself lucky as my wife will be cooking her best dishes to serve everyone. We are going to have proper Beef Wellington and Cordon Blue for
entres
and
creme brulee
for desserts. I hope this pick your interest. We are also
gonna
have some party games in between.
I hope to hear a response from you soon.
Best wishes,
Daniel.

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