IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 7
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 7 (General Training)
7.0
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05 Aug 24, 12:18
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Overall Feedback
The letter covers all the required points and maintains a semi-formal tone. However, there are several grammatical errors and some awkward phrasing that affect readability and coherence. Vocabulary usage is good but could be more varied.
| Overall score | 7.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 7.0 | |
| Task response | 7.0 |
| Total Errors | 11 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 1 | |
| Lexical resource | 6 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 1 |
Question
You are hosting a dinner party at your home. Write an invitation letter to a colleague from work.
Explain the occasion for the dinner party
Provide the date and time
Mention the menu or any special dishes
Request an RSVP
#Invitation Letter
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:156
Paragraphs:6
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Dear Ben,
I hope you are coping well and start to suit in well in the company. I write this letter to you to
officially
invite you to join me and my wife's first anniversary together. I seriously want to thank you as a friend for your constant advice and feedbacks before i
got married to my wife. Take this party as an official appreciation.The party will be next Friday, 7.00p.m. at my place, 3A, Jalan IJ2, 1/1, Taman Indah Jaya 2, 36000 Perak. As fellow eating mates, you should consider yourself lucky as my wife will be cooking her best dishes to serve everyone. We are going to have proper Beef Wellington and Cordon Blue for
entres
and creme brulee
for desserts. I hope this pick your interest. We are also gonna
have some party games in between.I hope to hear a response from you soon.
Best wishes,
Daniel.