IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5
5.5
Overall Score
05 Aug 24, 18:59
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Overall Feedback
The letter covers all the required points but has several grammatical errors and lacks coherence in some parts. Vocabulary usage is adequate but could be more varied, and the letter's formality is inconsistent with the semi-formal tone expected.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 20 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 9 | |
| Lexical resource | 3 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
You are planning a weekend getaway and want to invite your friend to join you. Write a letter to your friend.
Explain the details of the getaway (destination, dates, activities)
Express why you think they would enjoy it
Ask them to confirm if they can come
#Friend Meeting
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:116
Paragraphs:6
Word Count Requirement
Formality Match
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Ayushi,
I am Super excited to write this invitation to you as
i
am informing you about a fun getaway i
am planning this long weekend
it
would be a great experience. The destination would be Stanley park, Vancouver.Bungee jumping, paragliding and zip line would be the main
point
of focus . We can bring Some home made
appetizers to add an extra Spice on our day out.As the Summer is at its
bloom
I guarantee you would love this event. I expect a confirmation back from you that you can make this happen. To confirm event timing would be 11 am on 12 th
August. S,ee
you there .Your 's beloved,
Kitti