IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 6.5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 6.5 (General Training)
6.5
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24 Sept 24, 16:39
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Overall Feedback
The letter effectively addresses the tasks and maintains a formal tone. However, there are several grammatical errors and limited variety in sentence structures. The coherence and cohesion are good, but the vocabulary could be more varied.
| Overall score | 6.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 7.0 |
| Total Errors | 11 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 1 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
A colleague who is involved in community service is applying for an award and has asked you to write a recommendation letter.
Describe your colleague's community service activities
Highlight their impact on the community
Explain why they deserve the award
#Recommendation Letter
#Formal
Submitted Answer
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Words:122
Paragraphs:5
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Dear Award Committee,
I am writing to recommend my colleague, Sarah Johnson, for the Community Service Award. Sarah has been actively involved in several community service activities for the past five years. She
organize
weekly food drives, ensuring that low-income families has
access to nutritious meals. She also volunteers at the local shelter, providing care and support to homeless individuals.Sarah's efforts have made a significant impact in our community. Through her dedication, many families no longer have to worry about where their next meal will come from. Her work at the shelter has help numerous individuals find stability and hope. The community
respect
her greatly, and she has inspired many others to join in her efforts.Sincerely,
John Doe