IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7

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IELTS Letter Sample Band 7

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Overall Score
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The letter effectively addresses the tasks and maintains a formal tone. However, there are some grammatical errors and limited variety in sentence structures that affect the overall score.

Overall score7.0
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource7.0
Coherence & cohesion7.0
Task response8.0
Total Errors11
Grammatical range and accuracy5
Lexical resource2
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response1
Question
A colleague who is involved in community service is applying for an award and has asked you to write a recommendation letter.
Describe your colleague's community service activities
Highlight their impact on the community
Explain why they deserve the award
#Recommendation Letter
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:UK English
Words:157
Paragraphs:6
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Dear Award Committee,
I am writing to recommend my colleague, Sarah Johnson, for the Community Service Award. Sarah has been actively involved in several
community
service activities for the past five years. She
organize
weekly food drives, ensuring that low-income families
has
access to nutritious meals. She also volunteers at the local shelter, providing care and support to homeless individuals.
Sarah's efforts have made a significant impact in our
community
. Through her dedication, many families no longer have to worry about where their next meal will come from. Her work at the shelter has
help
numerous individuals find stability and hope. The
community
respect
her greatly, and she has inspired many others to join in her efforts.
I believe Sarah deserves this award because of her unwavering commitment to helping others and her ability to bring about positive change. Her selfless acts and tireless work have made our
community
a better place.
Sincerely,
John Doe