IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 6
6.0
Overall Score
04 Aug 24, 01:04
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The letter addresses the main points but contains several grammatical errors and lacks variety in sentence structures. The coherence and cohesion are adequate, but the vocabulary usage is somewhat limited and repetitive.
| Overall score | 6.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 13 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 2 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 3 |
Question
Your company was organizing a product launch event, but due to a delay in the product's production, it needs to be postponed. Write a letter to the attendees informing them about the postponement.
Explain the reason for the delay
Provide a new date for the event
Reassure them about the product quality
#Event Postponement
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:99
Paragraphs:6
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Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Attendees,
We understand everyone is super excited
for
the upcoming launch event of new products. Unfortunately
a delay in the production of goods caused a change in the launch event itenary
.It is going to take place on 24th august at 12pm instead of 11th August.
which
ensures enough time to do a fast processing in the manufacturing.I assure you about the quality of product that it would not be compromised. Apologies for the change , and thank you for your understanding in advance. Will be eagerly waiting to see you all at the event.
Sincerely ,
Kirti Verma