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IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5 (General Training)

5.5
Overall Score
06 Apr 25, 11:56
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Overall Feedback

The letter covers the main points but contains several grammatical errors and lacks a clear structure. Vocabulary is adequate but could be more varied, and the letter would benefit from improved coherence and a more formal tone.
Overall score5.5
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource6.0
Coherence & cohesion6.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors27
Grammatical range and accuracy14
Lexical resource5
Coherence & cohesion4
Task response3

Writing Task

#Anniversary Invitation
#Informal
You are hosting an anniversary celebration for your best friend and their partner. Write a letter to another friend inviting them to the celebration.
Explain the event
Provide the date and venue
Mention any gift or contribution ideas
Ask for an RSVP

Submitted Answer

Words152|Paragraphs4
English:UK English
Global Issues:
Formality Match
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Anna,
Its my pleasure to invite you
on
the Anniversary Celebration of our dear
friend
Joy and Mark as they celebrate their First year of being together.
There will be a small gathering
exculsive
only for family, relatives and closed friends
and
it will be on the 26th day of June, Saturday 4pm in the seaside with a beautiful
scenary
of sunset located at Azuela Cove, Davao City.
The theme of the said event
are
any
color
pastel, beach outfit are much appreciated, strictly no pants.
Furthermore, as a close friend we might have a little surprise for the
couple
such as gifts or any
contrbution
ideas
it up to you.
Its
our way to make them happy because
small
gift can make a big impact
for
them.
As their
Emcee
for that night
i
will need an ASAP response
for
this so that we can make some arrangement. Thank you.

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