IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5
5.5
Overall Score
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The letter addresses all the bullet points but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The coherence and cohesion are generally good, but the vocabulary usage could be more varied and precise.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 25 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7 | |
| Lexical resource | 12 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
You are planning a surprise engagement party for a friend. Write a letter to another friend inviting them to the party.
Explain the reason for the party
Give details about the date, time, and location
Mention any special arrangements or themes
#Invitation Letter
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:286
Paragraphs:7
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Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Anna,
Im
writting
this letter to invite you for
a special celebration. As you might know, Sarah recently published her new engament
proposal in
social media. Such a blessful
event must have a wonderful surprise party for the new to be wed
couple.As Sarah's best friend, I have the role to summon all her intimates to celebrate this beautiful life
achivement
. Im
counting on you to join our ceremony and share as much joy in the air. If it is of your interest, mark on your callender
the date of 17th of June at the Shine Restaurant.Preferably, arrival at the
vacinity
must be accomplished before 8pm. If it is impossible to reach the location due to the lack means
of transport, we would suggest you to call Andrew as soon as possible to make sure there will be open slots to pick you at your residence.Of course, formal wear will be appropriate since the event will be hosted at night. In addition,
bride
favorite
colours are blue and silver. However, it is mandatory to not bring any black suit, although on shoes and jewelry
is
permitted.By the way, we would love to gather as many presents for the final reveal. In other words, we recommend you to prepare
an
welcoming gift. Then, place it near the basket of letters after reception. All gifts will be secured, and, therefore, I garantee
you a calming yet cheerful dinner!In conclusion, I will be waiting for your response which could be checked using e-mail, phone, or in person. Again, the purpose of the meeting is to transmit love and acceptance with all friends and family united. We hope to see you there!