IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5
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IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5
5.5
Overall Score
18 Jul 24, 07:03
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The letter addresses all the bullet points but contains several grammatical errors and lacks variety in sentence structures. The coherence and cohesion are generally good, but the vocabulary could be more varied and precise to improve clarity and engagement.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 18 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 8 | |
| Lexical resource | 5 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
You have accepted a job offer in a different country. Write a letter to your friend to inform them about your move.
Explain the job offer
Describe the new country
Share your feelings about living abroad
#Moving Notice
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:161
Paragraphs:6
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Anggi,
How are you? I hope everything is going well. I wanted to write you about some plans I have. I wanted move to another country. Ever since I visited you last fall, I cannot stop thinking about how much
i
love Australia. During about that I was interested in the restaurant located there. I will start for the job in March which mean its
one month again. I love this Job because i
have passion in this position. As you know, i
have
a degree in Hospitality. So, This experience will be great for my career.I have decided to move there for a year! I'm quite sad because
i
left my family and friends. however
, I'm very happy and can't wait to live there. Because, I have rented a
apartement
to living for next month and i
live is very close to work.Can't wait to hear back from you soon.
Best Regards,
tika