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IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5.5

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5 (General Training)

5.5
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18 Jul 24, 04:03
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The letter addresses all the bullet points but contains several grammatical errors and lacks variety in sentence structures. The coherence and cohesion are generally good, but the vocabulary could be more varied and precise to improve clarity and engagement.
Overall score5.5
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource6.0
Coherence & cohesion6.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors18
Grammatical range and accuracy8
Lexical resource5
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response2

Writing Task

#Moving Notice
#Informal
You have accepted a job offer in a different country. Write a letter to your friend to inform them about your move.
Explain the job offer
Describe the new country
Share your feelings about living abroad

Submitted Answer

Words161|Paragraphs6
English:UK English
Global Issues:
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Anggi,
How are you? I hope everything is going well. I wanted to write you about some plans I have. I wanted move to another country. Ever since I visited you last fall, I cannot stop thinking about how much
i
love Australia. During about that I was interested in the restaurant located there. I will start for the job in March which mean
its
one month again. I love this Job because
i
have passion in this position. As you know,
i
have
a degree in Hospitality. So, This experience will be great for my career.
I have decided to move there for a year! I'm quite sad because
i
left my family and friends.
however
, I'm very happy and can't wait to live there. Because, I have rented
a
apartement
to living for next month and
i
live is very close to work.
Can't wait to hear back from you soon.
Best Regards,
tika

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