IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 7
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 7
7.0
Overall Score
05 Aug 24, 19:49
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The letter effectively addresses the tasks and maintains a semi-formal tone. However, there are minor grammatical errors and limited variety in sentence structures. The coherence and cohesion are good, but the vocabulary could be more varied to enhance the overall quality.
| Overall score | 7.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 7.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 7.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 7.0 |
| Total Errors | 10 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 1 | |
| Lexical resource | 3 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
You are planning a holiday abroad and need some advice. Write a letter to a friend who has been to that country.
Describe your travel plans.
Ask for recommendations on places to visit.
Inquire about any travel tips.
#Travel Plans
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:115
Paragraphs:7
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Dear Ana,
I'm so excited to share that I'm planning a trip to US from 15 Aug to 20th Aug! I know you spent some
amazing
time there last year, and I’m hoping you can be my trusty travel guide.I’m planning to spend 2 days in New york and then 3 days in California exploring the countryside. I’m
really
interested in hiking, food, and the historical museums. Do you have any recommendations for must-see places or hidden gems?I’d love to hear about your experiences there. Any tips on transportation, accommodations, or local customs would be incredibly helpful.
Can’t wait to hear from you!
Thanks,
Kirti