IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 8.5
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 8.5
8.5
Overall Score
09 Jul 24, 13:57
Want to practice?
Try this question
Overall Feedback
The letter effectively addresses all the tasks and maintains a semi-formal tone. Grammar and vocabulary usage are strong, though there are minor repetitions and a small error in the phrase 'few weeks weeks'. The letter is coherent and cohesive, with a logical flow of ideas.
| Overall score | 8.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 8.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 8.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 8.0 | |
| Task response | 9.0 |
| Total Errors | 6 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 2 | |
| Lexical resource | 2 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 2 | |
| Task response | 0 |
Question
You were on sick leave and a colleague took over your responsibilities. Write a letter to thank your colleague.
Explain why you were absent
Describe the tasks your colleague managed
Show appreciation for their help
#Thank a Colleague
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:151
Paragraphs:8
Readability
Coherence
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Dear Alex,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to express my heartfelt thanks for taking over my responsibilities during my recent sick leave.
I was absent due to a severe case of the flu, which required me to rest and recover for a few
weeks weeks
. I do apologize for any inconvenience my absence may have caused.During my leave, you managed several critical tasks, including overseeing the quarterly sales report, coordinating the team meetings, and handling client communications. Your diligent work ensured that everything ran smoothly and deadlines were met without any issues.
I truly appreciate your willingness to step in and handle these responsibilities. Your support
not only helped me recover without added stress but also ensured
that our team's progress was uninterrupted. I am deeply grateful for your assistance and understanding.Thank you once again for your exceptional help.
Best regards,
John Smith