IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 6.5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 6.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 6.5 (General Training)
6.5
Overall Score
10 Sept 24, 15:05
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Overall Feedback
The letter effectively addresses the tasks and shows appreciation. However, there are minor grammatical errors and some awkward phrasing. The coherence and cohesion are good, but the vocabulary could be more varied and precise.
| Overall score | 6.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 7.0 | |
| Task response | 7.0 |
| Total Errors | 18 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6 | |
| Lexical resource | 7 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 2 |
Question
You were on sick leave and a colleague took over your responsibilities. Write a letter to thank your colleague.
Explain why you were absent
Describe the tasks your colleague managed
Show appreciation for their help
#Thank a Colleague
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:137
Paragraphs:9
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Dear Alex
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude to you for covering my shifts during my absence.
Last month I had Flu so
l
had to stay home for at least 3 weeks in isolation. My leave was abrupt but, somehow you were able to feel in for me, and l
am grateful for it.I am amazed by
loads
of work you managed to complete while l
was away. The monthly sales reports and revenue expenditures were all up to date. In addition, you finished the balance sheet for the month of June.I truly appreciate your commitment and dedication to
process
all the outstanding work l
had prior to
me leaving.I
apologise
for any inconveniences
caused due to my absenteeism.Thank you once again for your exceptional hard work.
Regards
Britha