IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5.5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5 (General Training)
5.5
Overall Score
06 Aug 24, 19:46
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses all the bullet points but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Coherence and cohesion are generally maintained, but the informal tone and some unclear sentences affect readability. Vocabulary usage is adequate but could be more varied and precise.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 6.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 4.0 |
| Total Errors | 16 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 3 | |
| Lexical resource | 3 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 3 | |
| Task response | 6 |
Question
A friend invited you to their home for a festival celebration, but you couldn't attend. Write to apologize and send your greetings.
Apologize for not attending
Explain why you couldn't come
Send your festival greetings
Suggest a future meetup
#Festival Greetings
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:151
Paragraphs:5
Formality Match
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Adam,
Hello, mate. Please, my apology, I can not
attent
your festival celebration. As you know, I live with my grandma and no one takes care of her, furthermore, she is in a hospital for a serious ilness
. For the next four days
I actually have to be with her because she needs me, I am looking for a new nanny to take care of her, I would really appreciate
if you can find me one.Mate, I am so happy for you today, congratulations and I wish for a good luck and bright future for you. I am waiting to see you in formal attire but, unfortunately, this happens. I would suggest for a next week meeting in the park near the valley. Please let me know if you are available, we can still delay this meeting if you can't. See you around, dude.
Your supporter,
Beautiful Dania