IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5

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IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5

5.5
Overall Score
06 Aug 24, 19:46
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The letter addresses all the bullet points but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Coherence and cohesion are generally maintained, but the informal tone and some unclear sentences affect readability. Vocabulary usage is adequate but could be more varied and precise.

Overall score5.5
Grammatical range and accuracy6.0
Lexical resource6.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response4.0
Total Errors16
Grammatical range and accuracy3
Lexical resource3
Coherence & cohesion3
Task response6
Question
A friend invited you to their home for a festival celebration, but you couldn't attend. Write to apologize and send your greetings.
Apologize for not attending
Explain why you couldn't come
Send your festival greetings
Suggest a future meetup
#Festival Greetings
#Informal
Submitted Answer
English:UK English
Words:151
Paragraphs:5
Formality Match
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
Dear Adam,
Hello, mate. Please, my apology, I can not
attent
your festival celebration. As you know, I live with my grandma and no one takes care of her, furthermore, she is in a hospital for a serious
ilness
. For the next four
days
I actually have to be with her because she needs me, I am looking for a new nanny to take care of her, I would really
appreciate
if you can find me one.
Mate, I am so happy for you today, congratulations and I wish for a good luck and bright future for you. I am waiting to see you in formal attire but, unfortunately, this happens. I would suggest for a next week meeting in the park near the valley. Please let me know if you are available, we can still delay this meeting if you can't. See you around, dude.
Your supporter,
Beautiful Dania