IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5

IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)

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29 Mar 25, 03:44
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Overall Feedback

The letter addresses the task but contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, affecting clarity. The organization is somewhat logical, but the letter lacks a formal beginning and signature, and vocabulary usage is limited.
Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy5.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors34
Grammatical range and accuracy11
Lexical resource15
Coherence & cohesion4
Task response3

Writing Task

#Lost Item
#Semi-Formal
You misplaced your watch at a fitness center. Write a letter to the fitness center manager.
Describe the watch and its brand
Explain when and where you last saw it
Ask for help in locating it

Submitted Answer

Words187|Paragraphs10
English:UK English
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Incorrect or Missing Opening
Dear A,
Hope you are doing well.
I'm
writting
this letter to seek your help on checking if I misplaced my
watch
in your fitness
center
.
The
watch
is mixed by white and pink
color
. Diamond is made around
it's
face. My
watch
is a high end
profuct
of LV and you can find the logo which is located on the left of the
watch
.
I assume that the
watch
in in
202
locket
because I remember that the last time I put it off and placed
it
this
locket combined with my bags when I prepared for
excresing
at our
center
. When I finished my gym, I only picked my bag and
forget
to pick the
watch
.
Could you please help me check 202
locket
if my
watch
is there? If yes, could you please help me pick it to the
reciption
table and ask staff
help
me to keep it
.
And tomorrow
3
pm,
I'll
talk with
the staff and get back my
watch
.
Thank you so much for your help!
I'm
looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best
rgards
,
Sa

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