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IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5 (General Training)
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The response addresses the task but contains numerous grammatical errors and lacks formal tone. Coherence and cohesion are moderate, but the vocabulary is limited and sometimes inappropriate for a formal letter.
| Overall score | 5.0 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 5.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 5.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 50 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 22 | |
| Lexical resource | 19 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
During your stay at a hotel, the air conditioning in your room was not working properly.
Describe the problem with the air conditioning.
Explain how this affected your comfort.
Suggest what the hotel should do to fix this issue.
#Hotel Complaint
#Formal
Submitted Answer
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Words:236
Paragraphs:4
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A week
ago
I was stay
two night
at the hotel
for my vacation
. Night one nothing going wrong, everything was fine and
my family enjoy staying at the hotel
. The problem came
in
day two when the air conditioning started to stop at 11.00 pm. In
that time
we were stayed at the hotel
because the weather outside was very hot, it was about 27 degree
at celcius
.At first we
didn't
feel anything
but after half an hour the AC stopped, we started to feel so hot and sweated so much. So we called the front office to tell about the AC, the staff said that the room
boy
will come
immidiately
to fix the AC.After half an hour waiting, the
room
boy
has
n't
come
yet. We opened the rooms
door to have some wind so that we didn't
sweat too much. and
after almost one hour, the room
boy
finally came
andi
fixed the AC.We
don't
feel
anymore
hot or sweated, but we suggested the
hotel
that the
respond
time
from we
tell
the front office about the
unconvinient
to the
time
the
room
boy
fixed the AC
shouldn't
not
be that too long.
Responding time
is one of the basic standar
that should be noticed by the hotel
. Thankfully
the hotel
said that they accept
our suggestin
, and promise
the
will improve their services