IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5

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IELTS Letter Sample Band 5

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The response addresses the task but contains numerous grammatical errors and lacks formal tone. Coherence and cohesion are moderate, but the vocabulary is limited and sometimes inappropriate for a formal letter.

Overall score5.0
Grammatical range and accuracy4.0
Lexical resource5.0
Coherence & cohesion5.0
Task response5.0
Total Errors50
Grammatical range and accuracy22
Lexical resource19
Coherence & cohesion4
Task response4
Question
During your stay at a hotel, the air conditioning in your room was not working properly.
Describe the problem with the air conditioning.
Explain how this affected your comfort.
Suggest what the hotel should do to fix this issue.
#Hotel Complaint
#Formal
Submitted Answer
English:UK English
Words:236
Paragraphs:4
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A week
ago
I
was stay
two
night
at the
hotel
for my
vacation
. Night one nothing going wrong, everything was fine
and
my family enjoy staying at the
hotel
. The problem
came
in
day two when the air conditioning started to stop at 11.00 pm.
In
that
time
we were stayed at the
hotel
because the weather outside was very hot, it was about 27
degree
at
celcius
.
At first we
didn't
feel
anything
but after half an hour the AC stopped, we started to feel so hot and sweated so much. So we called the front office to tell about the AC, the staff said that the
room
boy
will
come
immidiately
to fix the AC.
After half an hour waiting, the
room
boy
has
n't
come
yet. We opened the
rooms
door to have some wind so that we
didn't
sweat too much.
and
after almost one hour, the
room
boy
finally
came
andi
fixed the AC.
We
don't
feel
anymore
hot or sweated, but we suggested the
hotel
that the
respond
time
from we
tell
the front office about the
unconvinient
to the
time
the
room
boy
fixed the AC
shouldn't
not
be that too long.
Responding
time
is one of the basic
standar
that should be noticed by the
hotel
.
Thankfully
the
hotel
said that they
accept
our
suggestin
, and
promise
the
will improve their
services