IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5
(General Training)
IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5
5.5
Overall Score
17 Jul 24, 15:18
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The letter addresses all the bullet points but contains several grammatical errors and lacks a formal beginning and signature. The coherence and cohesion are adequate, but the vocabulary usage could be more varied and precise.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 19 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 5 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Question
You recently received a notification that your magazine subscription is due for renewal. Write a letter to the subscription department.
Explain why you want to renew the subscription.
Mention any changes you would like to make in your subscription.
Ask about the payment options available.
#Subscription Renewal
#Semi-Formal
Submitted Answer
English:
Words:92
Paragraphs:1
Word Count Requirement
Paragraph Count Requirement
Formality
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
A pleasant greetings to the department of
subcription
! I would like to renew my magazine subcription
for me to be able to update the happenings and things in this world right now. Along the lines of
what i
'm
saying, I would like to suggest if you decorate the magazine a bit aesthetic to enhance the overall quality of the magazine. Lastly, may I ask what is the mode of the payment available? Is there an option "Cash on delivery" of payment available? If so, can I do it instead.
Thank you!