IELTS Letter Checker - Sample Band 5.5
IELTS Writing Task 1 Sample Band 5.5 | IELTS Letter Sample Band 5.5 (General Training)
5.5
Overall Score
17 Jul 24, 12:18
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Overall Feedback
The letter addresses all the bullet points but contains several grammatical errors and lacks a formal beginning and signature. The coherence and cohesion are adequate, but the vocabulary usage could be more varied and precise.
| Overall score | 5.5 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 5.0 | |
| Lexical resource | 6.0 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 6.0 | |
| Task response | 5.0 |
| Total Errors | 19 | |
| Grammatical range and accuracy | 4 | |
| Lexical resource | 5 | |
| Coherence & cohesion | 4 | |
| Task response | 4 |
Writing Task
#Subscription Renewal
#Semi-Formal
You recently received a notification that your magazine subscription is due for renewal. Write a letter to the subscription department.
Explain why you want to renew the subscription.
Mention any changes you would like to make in your subscription.
Ask about the payment options available.
Submitted Answer
Words92|Paragraphs1
English:
Global Issues:
Word Count Requirement
Paragraph Count Requirement
Formality
Readability
Coherence
Cohesion
Vocabulary Usage
Grammar Range
Logical Flow
Bullet Point Missing or Incomplete
A pleasant greetings to the department of
subcription
! I would like to renew my magazine subcription
for me to be able to update the happenings and things in this world right now. Along the lines of
what i
'm
saying, I would like to suggest if you decorate the magazine a bit aesthetic to enhance the overall quality of the magazine. Lastly, may I ask what is the mode of the payment available? Is there an option "Cash on delivery" of payment available? If so, can I do it instead.
Thank you!